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Daily Thought 1938

11/24/2019

 
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Baby Yoda at heart you are.

Daily Thought 1857

9/6/2019

 
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If you’re not being challenged, you’re not challenging yourself.


#challenge #self #responsibility #perspective

collecting thoughts on the run

7/11/2019

 
Running is one of the best ways I've found to percolate ideas from the recesses of my brain to words on a page. As activities go, it's a writer's best friend. But those runs can be long. A lot of ideas can come to me in an hour. With no way to write them down as I'm on the move, I turn to short term memorization. I make a little story of keywords and memorize that story as a single sentence, adding details to the story as new ideas come to me, until I return from my run, commit my story sentence to paper in shorthand, and then decode my notes, unpacking them in long form, usually on a computer. Here's an example from yesterday:
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Can't read my writing? What's the matter with you? 

Okay, here is a transcription, with explanation to follow:

"Riding in on a dazzling pillow turtle painted apple and broccoli, to the clock tower for a Stentigram; then I wrote a blog post -- AGA smile!" (I blame this ungrammatical sentence on my boneheaded decision to run beneath a blazing afternoon sun that pushed temps to the mid nineties. My mind sort of melted, and the words came out wrong.) 

No, my story sentence is not compelling in any traditional way, but I found it memorable enough to stick in my mind over 7 miles of local running trails. With it, I was able to capture and carry 10 ideas generated on the go.

Can you guess which of the words in the example story sentence are key words?

Dazzling: This key word I chose to help me remember a "Daily Thought" I conceived of: "Dazzle them with similar wrapped in different."

Pillow: To remind me of a plot point to include in my novel-in-progress.

Turtle: For a Facebook post idea, about a turtle I almost stepped on along a running trail.

Apple and Broccoli: For a new habit idea, to allow myself no calories each day until I have eaten an apple and some broccoli.

Clock Tower: Another novel plot point.

Stentigram: A coined word combining the words "stentorian" (denoting another plot point idea) and "Instagram" (to remind me to post a request for beta readers for my new novel).

Blog Post: To remind myself to write not this post but a subsequent one...

AGA: An acronym for that blog post's concept: "Anchor chart Google Approach."

Smile: Another Daily Thought: "My smile needs nothing from you."

I hope you will give this a try anytime you have multiple ideas and no place to put them. It takes practice to piece together an increasingly lengthy and absurd story mnemonic, but it gets easier -- and I trust you will find it well worth the productivity dividends you soon accrue.

BONUS: Photos of another example, including five pages of decoded notes after the story sentence, transcribed in the car immediately after a run.

harry potter, great and small (an outsider's view)

7/12/2017

 
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With all due trepidation, I admit that until a few days ago I was not a Harry Potter fan. What can I say? When, years earlier, I read Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone, I was not feeling the magic. In my defense, this was in the midst of a dark, mugglish phase of my life. 

I know, I know. Why should you keep reading such a scandalous affront to good taste? Who is this guy? Can a person trust such a person?

Wait. Shouldn't you be happy for me? Like – OMG, the grand story awaits you like a glorious banquet!

That is the sort of thought resonating through my mind when I recommend X book or Y movie or Z tv series to a friend who somehow missed out when most of the rest of us were all-in. The Fault in Our Stars. Baby Driver. Breaking Bad.

I hope you're feeling this feeling for me now. I imagine that you are. And this imagined feeling I ride like a wave.

It is why I have moved along at last to Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets. (I am on page 36.) Already I find myself with a newfound awe for Harry and Rowling. I will share a few outsider's insights...

But first, a bit more backstory:

No doubt you saw at least one of those "Which Hogwarts House Do You Belong In" personality tests that made the rounds to commemorate Harry's 20th anniversary on 6/26/2017 – that being my birthday, by the way – coincidence? – perhaps not.

​I'm a sucker for personality tests. When I came across a Hogwarts iteration, it reminded me that my Myers-Briggs results (INFP) purportedly correlate with the personality of none other than Harry himself. I couldn't resist taking the Hogwarts test to see whether I would be sorted as Gryffindor.

Here are my results: 
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So: Huffleclaw: predominately Hufflepuff yet also significantly Ravenclaw in nature.

Cool, I thought.

​Since so many folks these days share their Hogwarts affiliation on social media, identifying as such in their bios, I wanted in on that action.

Here's my bio as of today:
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Once you post a Hogwarts affiliation, you're duty-bound to read the whole Potter series if you have not already done so. Anything less would amount to sheer hypocrisy. 

Yes, I am all-in. Committed. Happy. This stuff is better than good, it's otherworldly. I am feeling it.

Which brings me back to page 36 of Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets.

Thus far, my biggest takeaway is: J.K. Rowling is a genius (duh) in ways myriad but particularly in juxtaposition – contrast – commingling opposites.

Here is a table I created to enumerate the excellence:
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Is it any wonder the Harry Potter books constitute the best-selling series of all time? Such unforgettable juxtapositioning essentially weighs reality against fantasy, disappointment against ideal, hell against heaven.

Don't we all want a secret identity, secret powers, a destiny with a higher purpose, adoration, respect and Quidditch?

​Don't we all feel trapped by circumstance, holed up in a metaphorical room under the stairs or a chamber offering only a catflap of a connection to the outer world?

Rowling paints our anguish and desire on the page with colors magical, breathtaking, and bold. We appreciate the art.

But enough with the analysis. I have 998,712 more words to read.

drop everything and routine

7/10/2017

 
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I used to marvel at writers who write a lot. Now, I'm glad to say, I am one of those writers. My secret is not innate awesomeness. It's routine. 

Here's what I've found works:
  • Make an outline document for your novel. I like using Google Documents for this as well as for each of my chapters. Include a section for: title, genre, logline, principal characters and their primary strengths, flaws and desires, and an initial sketch of the plot. I recommend studying the hero's journey.
  • Don't start writing until you have strong ideas for all key plot points. Particularly important, I think are a beginning with a hook, a reversal midpoint that represents some kind of severe setback or near-death experience, and a killer ending you will look to writing.
  • Choose at least one chunk of time per week to get at least the first 2-3 hours of writing done. I love going to Starbucks on a Saturday or Sunday morning, setting up my iPad with keyboard, and savoring a Venti Peppermint Mocha while listening to the Moana soundtrack or The War on Drugs album Lost in the Dream on my wireless headphones. This first session should give you momentum.
  • Choose a day of the week to be an "accountability day" upon which you will share with someone what you have produced. Mine is usually Friday, though sometimes I finish early.
  • Create a weekly writing goal. Mine is one chapter. Typically, this turns out to be 10-20 pages.
  • Use the magnetism of accountability to attract you to your goal. Sprinkle in writing time as needed throughout the week in order to meet your goal.
  • Share your work with your accountability partner or group. For me, this is my wife and my 8th-grade students. To the latter, I read aloud one chapter per week. This I have found to be a powerful force of motivation. I know at least some students are waiting to hear what happens next, so I am inspired to write something good for them. You might choose to share with a writer friend or with a writing group.
  • Solicit feedback. I pose a Google question to my students via Google Classroom. You might ask for email responses, verbal responses, or comments on a shared document.
  • Once you have feedback, copy and paste it as a group of comments in the chapter document. If any errors are easy to fix, do so right away. Leave all other errors to fix after you've completed the novel's first draft. Otherwise, you will be liable to get sidetracked, stuck in the mud where your wheels are destined to spin. Of course, when reviewing feedback, you need not make all suggested changes. Let the comments simmer. Decide later what the best course of revision will be.
  • Once you've finished your novel's rough draft and revised and edited according to your feedback, print out one chapter at a time and revise and edit by hand. This often leads to better revisions.
  • Print the chapter again and record yourself reading it aloud, pausing to make corrections whenever you find new errors, unnecessary repetition, or awkward passages. For this, I use the Voice Memos app on my iPhone. Then I send myself the completed audio file and upload it to Google Classroom for students to review if they wish. I don't know how many listen to these, but I know that at least some of them do, and this gives me an extra boost of warm-fuzzy to stoke the fires of my commitment.
  • Make changes based on the notes you made while recording.
  • Repeat until your routine becomes second nature.
  • Enjoy your shiny, happy writing habits. :)

Of course, my routine might not work for you. Then again, it might. Try some or all of it. Tweak some or all of it. Or not, and not. But do something. Good routines do not just happen – they are cultivated. 

So get cultivating. Drop everything and ROUTINE!

the pattern of the error of my ways

7/9/2017

 
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Until recently, I did not realize how often I start sentences with the word so. That changed when I tried a new method of editing. This method, which is simple and obvious unless you share my male-pattern boneheadedness, facilitates a big-picture view. It helps me to notice repeated errors, patterns.

Rather than edit my novel's chapters within each individual Google Document, I now edit the entire manuscript at once within a Word document with Grammarly enabled. I have no stake in Grammarly, but I do recommend it. If you're not already using the free Chrome extension, give it a try. Here's an example of how a notification might look:
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I am a grammar aficionado, but I'm not perfect. Editing a whole manuscript in a cursory fashion, focusing only on addressing issues noted by Grammarly, I see now what had previously escaped my attention.

​Lately, for example, I've been pruning my current wily nemeses: so, actually, really, pretty. I had been employing these words to reflect teen speech patterns... yet global manuscript editing has empowered me to see how I've gone overboard.

Fellow writers, let's vow never to sink once we have gone overboard. Climb with me aboard the good ship Grammarly – and see what you've been missing.

First Words and Last

7/28/2016

 
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The above title was carefully worded, and this post is meant to convince you to pay special attention not only to word choice in general but to words first and last. Briefly, I considered alternative titles such as:

1. "First Words and Last Words"

2. "First and Last Words"

3. "Words First and Last"

How do you suppose I came to my decision? Obviously the answer has something to do with the importance of first and last words. Do you see what I did there? That time I ended with the word "words" because that time I wanted "words" to be the last thought in your head.

First words announce and transition.
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Last words echo.
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So let's take a closer look at my proposed first and last word options. "Words" works because it immediately gets readers thinking about the topic of words, but I went with "First" because I think it better emphasizes the importance of first word choices. Similarly, "Words" as a last word is not as powerful as is "Last" for advancing my theme.

Now take a look at these lists...

First words used so far: First, This, Briefly, First, First, Words, How, Obviously, Do, That, First, Last, So, Words, Similarly, Now

Last words used so far: Last, last, Words, Words, Last, decision, words, there, head, transition, echo, options, choices, theme, list

Notice that first words are trickier to wrangle. "This," for example, is a pronoun, abstract and vague, not a great first word; but in the first sentence it's coupled with "title" as a sort of compound word unit: "this title," which is effective.

I try to be intentional in all of my writing, including first words and last. Do you?

If I Ever Die

7/22/2016

 
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This is a poem I wrote after hearing a story about somebody stuck in grief. This is for everyone, but especially for anyone who loves me. ❤️😃 #poetry #death #love #life

a thought a day keeps lazy writing away

6/8/2016

 
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I've always loved quotes. There's something magical about a well-turned phrase that captures a particular idea in a memorable way. So when my friend asked me to help her gut out her pregnancy and her maternity leave by encouraging her with regular kernels of solace, I found a way to take an opportunity to be helpful and twist it to serve my own needs!

What came of this was my Daily Thoughts. Now, nearly two years since I pecked out Thought #1 on my phone, I can attest that my routine of concentrated brainstorming and wordsmithing has reinvigorated my writing. Here's how it works:

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got to tame that rough giraffe

9/16/2015

 
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WRITER

8/12/2015

 
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Writer Meme: What I think I do... What I actually do. 

show, don't tell: kenny rogers vs. the flaming lips

8/11/2015

 
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Most writing experts agree that it's best for fiction to "show, don't tell." Simply put, that means that a story should come to life like a movie or a virtual reality scene unfolding in brilliant detail in the reader's imagination. If you find yourself thrilled by a particular piece of fiction, chances are you are under the spell of a word-wielding wizard who knows how to put on a show. 

Today, I experienced a "show, don't tell" epiphany. It came to me through my Bluetooth headphones, and it was music to my ears.

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the strange, ingenious plot structure of john green's paper towns

8/4/2015

 
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John Green's Paper Towns works brilliantly as a mystery, a comedy and a YA coming-of-age story in no small measure due to its strange, ingenious plot structure.

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when writing YA...

7/21/2015

 
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When writing YA, don't forget the young or the adult.

we want to root for your characters

7/19/2015

 
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From Writing Irresistible Kidlit by Mary Kole

12 reasons writers should be runners

7/18/2015

 
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For decades, I hated running. Now I love it. IMHO, writing and running are sole mates. 

(See what I did there? I saw the writerly opportunity and I ran with it.) 

Running has transformed my body and my writing. It can do the same for you. Here's how:

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revision needs many voices

7/17/2015

 
Revision is a test of patience and endurance. If you fail this test, your writing will be under-cooked, not ready for public consumption. 

Have you ever disliked a book or a movie or a song before liking it later? If so, it's probably because from day to day you are a different person in a different place in a different time. Your moods change. You change.

One key to revision is to keep cutting, shifting, adding and tweaking your text until you are consistently happy with it across many days and moods. Until the many versions of you are satisfied with the words you've put on the page.

So consider the following:

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bring on the badass!

7/15/2015

 
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If you are writing YA and you'd like to breathe life into a badass character, pay attention to Margo Roth Spiegelman, who breathes life into John Green's Paper Towns.

Marvel, if you will, at the badassery of Margo's inciting incident entrance and speech. Be on the lookout for Green's expert sprinkling of the story spices of humor, action, intrigue, imagery, desire and conflict:

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nice to meet you: introducing your protagonist

7/12/2015

 
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Authors find writing first chapters challenging for many reasons. Ideally, we should:
  1. Begin with action
  2. Describe a setting
  3. Establish the story's predominant tone
  4. Introduce one or more main characters (preferably including the protagonist)
  5. Show these characters' desires and flaws
  6. Suggest the novel's most significant theme
  7. Present a story problem
  8. Convey back-story

Phew! That's a lot. 

Let's take a look at a highly effective first chapter, from Taylor Jenkins Reid's Maybe in Another Life. (Here's the first chapter.) 

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freeze, grammar police

7/11/2015

 
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Writers: grammar is just rules for words. When rules don't fit, we must not quit. Let us pledge to bend or break any rules obstructing the storied paths of justice. Great writers tell their inner grammar ("and usage!") police when to freeze and look away.

Veronica Roth, for example, consciously eschewed convention when naming the five factions of her Divergent series.
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